John, your swing looks better, but your cadence went back to 1..2..3..4..slide instead of 1..2..3.4.slide, keep the swing the same and speed up your feet that should get the trail leg out of the way and get your timing right.
EddieK, the modern method for perfect timing is to say the word "foot" as the slide foot stops then say the word "ball" as the ball passes, if timing is right you should be able to say the word football, with john, the foot and ball are at the same place at the same time, so he is early. In ye oldern days it was thought that the foot and ball should be at the release at the same time, but it was later found that the bowler is better able to impart leverage at the line from a stable position if the foot is still moving as the ball is being released, then the bowler is not stable. Many things have changed since then and timing is just one of them.