First off, welcome!
Second, for the side view, could you post a shot where the camera
is at the foul line recording your "ball side?" That would allow us to see your timeing, eyes, shoulders, etc. better.
Third, it appears that you control the ball a lot in your swing. Your body should "walk around the ball," your ball should not "swing aroung your body." You seem to focus a lot of energy walking straight up to the line with minimal movement. Relax a little, and if your body moves some, that can be a good thing! Look up some of the pros on youtube, they have a lot of movement, and a free loose armswing. Push the ball out and allow it to control what happens. Let the ball pull your arm around, not the other way.
Do this, and post another video, we are looking forward to how you improve! Again, welcome to the site!
(You have a lot of positives, a steady head, good follow through, etc. Stick with it!)
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