you have a nice throw John. your back up ball throws had a nice flow, good cadence on your approach, and a free armswing which you don't see very often.
I do noticed that your timing is just a little early. fine if you like to throw straight but since it sounds like your looking to get a few more revs, you really need to delay your hinge about a 1/2 a step. Since your a 5 step approach think first step, 2nd step... then let the ball hinge. Your hinge is starting before your second step is getting to floor.
As for your balance arm, your really not using it to its full potential. the Idea with pointing it forward is to get your shoulders open. But your video barely has the shoulders opening at all. Try actually pointing your balance arm at your target (even point with your finger at the mark) and stretching it forward, this will open the shoulders more. The time you move your arm to the side is still a preference thing so don't worry too much about it, rather get the shoulders open first.
For the wrap around armswing (one of my personal demons) focus on where the hinge swings at the start. you want the sensation that it is going to hit your right leg. as long as your stepping over on the second step (you could do better) you shouldn't hit it. watch jason couch vids. he actually brushes his hand on his leg alot of times. thats how close you need your hand to your leg to prevent the ball natrually swinging around at the top of your swing.
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